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Posted Dec 26, 2012 - 3:03 PM

Edit: First track improved + New track is up! =)
Edit2: Another New track is up!


Hi there, I hope this is not considered spam... I'm an aspiring composer starting to build a portfolio and I recently created my first track. I made it using orchestral libraries and tried to imagine this was the audio for a movie trailer.

I'm looking for all kinds of feedback that you can give me =)


www.soundcloud.com/ignasivelasco


I'll really appreciate anything that you tell me ^^

Blade and Soul's soundtrack is also very inspiring, I'm willing to make some of that stuff in the future.

Thank you for your time!

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Posted Dec 26, 2012 - 3:15 PM

View PostHaneul, on Dec 26, 2012 - 3:03 PM, said:

Hi there, I hope this is not considered spam... I'm an aspiring composer starting to build a portfolio and I recently created my first track. I made it using orchestral libraries and tried to imagine this was the audio for a movie trailer.

I'm looking for all kinds of feedback that you can give me =)

www.soundcloud.com/ignasivelasco


There's only one track for now but I've made a few more. Blade and Soul's soundtrack is also very inspiring, I'm willing to make some of that stuff in the future.

Thank you for your time!


Hmm. I like it!

When I heard it, this came to mind for some reason. I'm sure you're familiar with him.
"Life exists only at this very moment, and in this moment it is infinite and eternal, for the present moment is infinitely small; before we can measure it, it has gone, and yet it exists forever...."

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Posted Dec 26, 2012 - 3:36 PM

View PostElysiuM, on Dec 26, 2012 - 3:15 PM, said:

Hmm. I like it!When I heard it, this came to mind for some reason. I'm sure you're familiar with him.


wow, I didn't know him o.o it's soooooo epic... I'll work hard to improve but this is really really beautiful! thanks for showing me =)
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Posted Dec 26, 2012 - 3:48 PM

For more ideas look up Two Steps From Hell. Great orchastral music and they have their stuff in movie trailers
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Posted Dec 26, 2012 - 4:00 PM

View PostHaneul, on Dec 26, 2012 - 3:36 PM, said:

wow, I didn't know him o.o it's soooooo epic... I'll work hard to improve but this is really really beautiful! thanks for showing me =)


No problem. He's one of the founders of the production company Two Steps From Hell.
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Posted Dec 29, 2012 - 3:45 PM

I uploaded a second track!~ I hope you like it ^^ I also fixed the first one (the mastering was not well done, now it's better).

Thank you for your recommendation about Two Steps From Hell, they are really awesome :D I already knew some of their works but I'll be getting inspiration from them once again =P
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Posted Dec 29, 2012 - 11:53 PM

I like them both, but they do sound a tad generic.
Also, if you're looking for imspiration, I adore Matt Uelmen's work, specifically the Diablo 2 and Torchlight soundtracks.
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Posted Dec 30, 2012 - 5:20 PM

Thank you Fatal, following all your advice and some other people's comments too, I made a new short piece to see if I'm on the right path :D I loved making this one:

https://soundcloud.c...lasco/nightfall

I added piano this time =)



Time to check out all those names that you said on youtube ^^
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